Rewrite the '15 important stuff about my dream boy'

Before
15 important stuff about my dream boy~:
1. handsome/cute (durhhh)
2. sensitive
3. romantic
4. can teach me homework (haha)
5. clean (as in don't throw rubbish anywhere, bathe every day .....................)
6. kind
7. bertanggungjawab ( do what he says he'll do. )
8. berani ( can protect me!!)
9. happy happy d ( not every day gloomy gloomy. like wanna die liao)
10. hard working
11. dont always fight with ppl
12. talkative ( so can everytime start the conversation)
13. does not snore too loud when sleeping
14. better if learn karate or something like that
15. RICH!!!( I like money. Haha!!! Im a money face!)

After
15 important stuff about my dream boy~:
1. handsome/cute
2. sensitive
3. romantic
4. can teach me homework (haha)
5. clean (as in don't throw rubbish anywhere, bathe every day .....................)
6. kind
7. bertanggungjawab ( do what he says he'll do. But if he wanna let it go, LET IT GO LA! Come on, he got his own life isin't!?)
8. berani ( can protect me!!)
9. happy happy d ( not every day gloomy gloomy. like wanna die liao)
10. hard working( dont TOO hardworking la ! 'Medium, medium' can liao)
11. dont always fight with ppl( or else will hurt somebody! )
12. talkative ( so can everytime start the conversation)
13. does not snore too loud while sleeping( but it's natural~~ Why do i even care..^^)
14. better if learn karate or something like that( but if didnt learn, it's ok..)
15. RICH!!!( Aiya...no need TOO rich la..also 'medium, medium' can liao)

The things i corrected is in red colour d. (You probally saw it liao la!)